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It's your turn to try to leave;
For everytime I try; I inevitably fail.
Just leave and never look back,
Hop off the dock, into the boat, and set sail.

Don't even think of turning around.
Or you'll see somethings you don't want to see.
You'll witness what you're abandoning.
You'll realize that you're leaving me.

I'll stand on the coast,
Waving goodbye; my arms in the air.
In a flash, you'll recall our life and the good times.
And you'll wish you were back there.

But then, I'll turn and walk away,
Leaving my footprints on the shore.
You'll want to come back,
You'll feel shaken to the core.

You'll realize how I had felt,
And what I went through
All those times, I tried and failed.
To get over, and leave behind you.

Leave with haste, I grant you Godspeed.
See if I notice, see if I care.
And when you return, try to find me.
And see if I'm still there.

But you'll be to late,
For I'll be long gone.
One of us had to leave,
And you simply took to long.

You'll look for me everywhere,
You'll feel hopelessly alone.
You'll realize with terror,
You forgot to check for a gravestone.

Run like the wind
Past the graveyard gate.
You'll realize that you should've never left.
But like I said, you realized to late.

This really is the only way,
To leave behind and forget,
Our happiness, our love,
And my every overpowering regret.

I know life is cruel and unfair,
But I did leave a note,
I know it's not enough,
The 'goodbye' will hurt the most.

I tried to let you go,
And leave you behind.
But it wasn't a connection of the body,
But of the heart and mind.
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This poem took all of 10 minutes to write,
The words just kept pouring and pouring,
My pen couldn't move fast enough to record the words as I thought of them.
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~punx-chan89 Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what an amazing poem!! I love the . imagery and words you used especially the gravestone line
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~xxAgonisticMiseryxx Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. (:
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~punx-chan89 Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Mood: Love *TenderRevenge Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This really really is wonderful! I love this so much I can't even say! This is perfect for me right now! I love it!
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~xxAgonisticMiseryxx Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. (:
Yeah, it was a spur of the moment, major venting kind of deal.
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*TenderRevenge Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's amazing that you could write that good on the spur of the moment. Somehow not too surprising though. When we are hurting that tends to be an extremely creative time. "The most beauty comes from the worst pain." But still, it's amazing writing!

I hope you feel better now that you vented some. :hug:
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~xxAgonisticMiseryxx Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much. (:

and yeah, it did help. :hug:
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~Annuski Jan 9, 2013  Student Writer
This is beautiful, and so, so sad... I love the reference to the gravestone
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~xxAgonisticMiseryxx Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, a lot.
That was one of my favorite lines in this entire poem. XD
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~Annuski Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
I can see why =)
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